There are times in life when we need to see things in a different perspective. It helps us to open our mind to new thoughts and also to lighten the burden when in distress.
So, here are two Haiku depicting a perception.
Speech in parliament
Eyewash or authentic
Tears when in love
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How will she manage?
Both, the home and her work
Go rise and shine, baby
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Wonderful. Not a poetry person at all but somehow it touched my heart too.
I am glad that the verses touched your heart, Anindya. 🙂
Writing poetry is a special talent which I do not possess. It requires a conciseness and a different approach to thinking outside the box. Congratulations for successfully using this talent in your haiku. #CherylProWriting
Thank you so much for your kind words, Cheryl. I am happy that I could write poems and pour out my thoughts.
so true and touching. loved the last line, go rise and shine!
I am glad that you liked the Haiku, Zainab.
I loved the way you have written these haikus, especially the second one. Looking forward to reading more.
I am glad that you liked the haiku, Reema and I look forward to see you more often here. 🙂
Hi Rohan! Glad to connect with you here. It takes a special kind of talent to convey so much in so little. So, these two Haikus made an interesting read. I personally haven’t yet attempted writing one but now I think I should after reading this. I invite you to take a look at my day´s post at http://www.thetinaedit.com. All the best!
Thank you Tina for visiting my blog. Glad to connect with you as well. 🙂 I am glad that you found the haiku a interesting read. I will surely visit your blog soon.
Can so relate to the second one… touching
I am glad that you can relate to the haiku, Sabeeka. Thank you for visiting my blog. 🙂
That was a great read. Touched my heart ❤️
I am glad that you liked it, Anchal.
For a short form, i find Haiku to be a bit of a challenge! Great going taking up this form of poetry.
Haiku is challenging, but with little practice you can also learn to write some lovely haiku, Ishieta. Thank you for visiting my blog. 🙂
I admise people who pen down poetry. Good one. Loved the Second one!
Glad that you liked the haiku, Sheetal. 🙂
It was seriously a great read !!
Thank you.
Beautifully penned and interesting lines. Keep writing.
Thank you.
Nice read- Not into haiku or poetry much though enjoyed your post
Glad that you enjoyed reading.
I learnt something new today… the meaning of “Haiku”…
Beautifully written lines, few lines says much more than what zillion words can not…Thank you for sharing this with us.
I am glad that you learnt something new, Kavita. 🙂
Simple, and heart felt Rohan. All the best for #MyFriendAlexa
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Thank you, Natasha. All the best to you as well!
Simple and cute. I however it comes to haaiku, i suck at it!
Thanks Tina, try writing it sometimes. You will learn the art.
Hell yeah…!! Like a lot of women today – i rise, i shine!
Yes, rise and shine. Thanks for liking the haiku, Prisha.
Short but deep, it was beautifully written 🙂
Thanks Manisha. Happy that you liked the lines. 🙂
I have been in awr with Haiku lately. It’s small but that takes effort.
Beautifully written Rohan. 🙂
Thank you so much, Ramya. Writing a haiku is a fun task for me. It challenges me to play with words and effectively come out with a compelling haiku.
I clearly do not get Haiku. I tried understanding the traditional Japanese ones thinking that since they’re ancient and so respected, there must be something remarkable about them that I’m not getting. I read some written by contemporary poets, such as yourself, and I still didn’t get them. To me, they feel like a shadow in air which I’m seeing but my vision is blurred. I’m reaching out to touch it and it just dissolves away and so, I’m left feeling that I’d never know what it was.
I believe, my quest must continue and I hope to understand Haiku someday and return to enjoy your poems here.
Till then, keep writing. The day I’ll be enlightened, I’ll return with a huge appetite 😀
Thank you so much reading my haiku, Mansi. I understand what you are trying to say. Even I was struggling initially, but with a little practice in writing haiku and reading more about it, I somehow manage to write one.
I look forward to see you soon. 🙂