Into the fourth day of #NaPoWriMo and #AtoZChallenge, I’ve decided to go with free verse rather than the prompt.
So presenting my theme, Haiku with a theme in theme, Love and then a Tanka on the similar theme.
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Deliticent feel
Sudden volcanic demerge
Deosculate soul
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Now, the Tanka attempted for the first time ever!!
Deep rooted feelings
Eventually erupt
That soothing vista
Pleasing arrangement of beats
Hearts marry for a warm kiss
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And below are my fellow #NaPoWriMo participants:
jaibalarao.com – Jaibala
justamom.blogspot.in – Sfurti
http://janakinagraj.com – Janaki
http://poojashridhar.blogspot.in – Pooja
http://andiwrite.com – Hrishikesh
http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in – Karan
http://viewsofpreethib.wordpress.com – Preeti
Do visit the above links to read some awesome posts. Cheers!!
I liked both.
that was so lovely 🙂
even I have written a poem on first kiss, will share with you
Lovely write Rohan 🙂
Wow Wow Wow…amazing…I am running out of words….I wish I could write these Rohan 🙂
Nicely done!
Loved both 🙂
ab ye tanka kya hai 😮 !
Haikus amuse me. can never write one properly
Good one
Lovely 🙂
Volcanic demerge..very nicely done!
Thank you Karan 🙂
Yea please do share, would love to read it 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Thank you so much 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Thank you so so much 🙂 🙂 It is pretty easy to write but a lil bit time consuming as you have to fit in the appropriate syllables.
Tanka is a extension of Haiku where the syllables will be in the sequence of 5-7-5-7-7.
Thanks Afshan 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Thank you so much Pooja 🙂