The Arrival

Posted by Rohan Kachalia | Oct 24, 2013 | Micro Fiction | 8 |

‘The weight has increased tremendously since we last met’, said a burly voice assumingly looking not so pleased with a crinkled brow.

A cute chuckle adorned the cherubic face.

A slight twinge inside and there came the deafening ‘aah’ as it moved, signalling that the time has come to relieve from the physical exertion.

This time will surely make it outwards. I knew it was my last day there as I could sense the coldness of fresh air blowing inside through the orderly incision.

Heart began throbbing with the passage of every second.

‘Congratulations! You’re blessed with a baby girl’.

This post is written for Write Tribe where the prompt being ‘I knew it was my last day there’.

About The Author

Rohan Kachalia

Rohan Kachalia is an avid reader and writer who have a keen interest in reading fiction and writing stories which revolve around love. His short stories and poetries are published in various anthologies, the recent one being 'The Fence'. Taking his writing to a next level, you will soon see his first novel out in stores. You can reach him on Twitter - @rohank01 & on Instagram- kacrohan

8 Comments

Obsessivemom on October 25, 2013 at 11:16 am

What a sweet take on the prompt.. And a happy one too. Cheers to a new beginning.
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vishalbheeroo on October 27, 2013 at 6:48 am

woohoo! Lovely prompt:)
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vishalbheeroo on October 27, 2013 at 6:48 am

Such a feel good 100 words:)
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Rohan Kachalia on October 29, 2013 at 11:35 am

Yes, Cheers to a new beginning. 🙂
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Rohan Kachalia on October 29, 2013 at 11:37 am

Thanks Vishal 🙂
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Rohan Kachalia on October 29, 2013 at 11:38 am

Thanks Vishal. Yes, arrival of the baby is indeed a feel good feeling for everyone! 🙂
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Khushboo Motihar on November 2, 2013 at 1:23 pm

A surprising end to your story. Loved it 🙂
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Rohan Kachalia on November 8, 2013 at 12:37 pm

Happy that you loved it and kept you hooked till the end with a surprise 🙂
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