A beep on his mobile phone made him ran straight towards the top of his building. Taking two-three steps simultaneously, he reached the terrace in no time although gasping for breath. He positioned his binoculars and glanced at her charming face, wavy hair, smoky eyes and her breathtaking smile as he skipped a heartbeat.

Background:This fiction is written capturing the essence of First Love, A Silent Love when a feeling of love races in someone’s heart, a small bubble of joy bursts on seeing that person and hoping silently to muster some courage and eventually ask that person out.
Author’s Note: This is the fourth time a 55 fiction has been tried. Hope to get some views on the above as I am still learning the nuances of writing 55 Fiction.
Rohan Kachalia